Leotard Crushed Pink

Leotard Crushed Pink
rate my poem? please!!!!!!!!!!?

Kindergarden crush

Eyes shinning bright
Blue skyes above
Holding hands,
A kiss on the cheek

This feels a lot like love

Swing-set marriages
Valentines Day cards
His Spongebob Lunch box
And my pink leotard

this is just the start, im not done yet
i dont know how to finish it!
can you help?
How about this for the ending?

Swing-set marriages
Valentines Day cards
His chocolate mustache smile
Warming my heart
******chocolate milk mustache smile

wow!!!!

that is awsome!!
i am not kidding but i would like nominate it for the best poem

def.10/1 lol.0
that is so cute! keep on going and u might hav a job there.

FIT: Trailer (Peccadillo Pictures)